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Postby mirrowdothack » Tue Mar 25, 2014 6:05 pm

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Subject title: Mirrowdothack's Sketchbook

Hello guys ^^
I'm Mirrow(dothack) and I'm really trying to get much better with my art level.
I love to try out different art styles and to draw characters ♥

My goals:
• train to draw more realistic *it's still damn hard for me OTL
• drawing animals and backgrounds
• to draw more dynamic and to "master" perspectives *gonna try my very best

Here are some of my works, wish you fun^^:

#character from my pen and paper group^^
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#random chara
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#chara from my visual novel Y;N
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#chara from my pen and paper group^^
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#wip of my current picture (a fanart of attack on titan)
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If you have any questions, opinions etc. please feel free to ask me.
If you need any help and thing I might be able to help you, please feel free to send me a PN.
If you have any advise, please feel free to tell me *thank you♥
If my English is kinda bad I appologize: I'm from Germany ^^"
If ... I don't know anything more, but if you have something to add, feel free to do so^^

Wish you much fun, cu around
Mirrow^^
My sketchbook on sycra: viewtopic.php?f=3&t=9655

 

Postby ShapeShifter » Tue Mar 25, 2014 6:34 pm

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Cool stuff, I look forward to seeing more!
I have trouble drawing/painting realism in my art as well, I love line art to much :).
My critic is that your character poses feel a little stiff, I'd suggest practicing gesture from life to help your work feel more fluid and dynamic.
It's hard to beat a person who never gives up. -Babe Ruth

 

Postby AlphaPetra » Tue Mar 25, 2014 7:07 pm

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Hello and welcome ^w^
I'll try to make a bit of constructive critiques

For the first character with the gun, I think he is too stiff. There is no flow going from his head to his feet. Also I don't know if he's supposed to be walking or not, it feels a bit strange ^^

I love the girl with pink hair, she's very nice, I'm not sure about her feet but she's cool :)

For that Levi fanart, I think there's something wrong with his legs, and with the connection between his torso and his legs (the pelvis area). Did you draw him naked before adding his clothes and gear ? :p
Oh and if I remember well, the rectangular part of the 3D maneuver gear wasn't that bulky, i think it was thinner and maybe a bit longer

I hope this helps, please post more c:

 

Postby mirrowdothack » Fri Jul 25, 2014 8:36 pm

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Thank you so much for your feedback^^ (and sry for my long... well... I took my time OTL).
I will work on those issues and your comment will help me a lot, so thanks again^^.

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I'm currently working on a small visual novel. Here is a quick WIP of the main hero.
(I'm trying to work with silhouettes and hope it will help me to drawn more relaxed poses)

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My sketchbook on sycra: viewtopic.php?f=3&t=9655

 

Postby mirrowdothack » Sun Jul 27, 2014 6:52 pm

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Good luck Phil ♥
(sketch of Phil "The Power"Taylor, today he has to face van Gerwen (@dart competition))

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My sketchbook on sycra: viewtopic.php?f=3&t=9655


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