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Postby mrstorm » Sun Apr 10, 2016 8:26 pm

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Subject title: mrstorm sketchbook

Hello everyone! I am an art lover, I always wanted to draw and paint my whole life. I have been drawing on and off for 10 years now and only in the last 3 year I really started studying the art.

I like to draw anything, but my preferences go to traditional and concept art/illustration. I also like to dabble in caricature from time to time.

I want to get more serious about my art. This is the first reason I want to start a sketchbook here. I really like Sycra and he's been a wonderful source for a big part of my drawing knowledge. I hope this post will help me get feedback from others and teach me how to improve. I also hope to know other people on this forum and give some knowledge when I can.

Thank you for reading.

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Postby KeaneFox » Mon Apr 11, 2016 1:39 pm

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Welcome to the forum! I like her design and the idea of davy crockett nuke as her weapon.I feel her legs are a bit long.

 

Postby mrstorm » Tue Apr 12, 2016 3:41 pm

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Some gesture drawings. Would really love some feedback on these.

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Postby melnics » Tue Apr 12, 2016 11:24 pm

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mrstorm wrote:Some gesture drawings. Would really love some feedback on these.


I think the structure of the legs and arms could be defined a bit more, right now most of them are showing one side of the contour or an action line.
Below is a rough example of what I mean, you've done in on a few of the figures already so I'm sure it won't be too hard to be consistent with it.
Try looking up some videos on Glenn Vilppu, if I remember correctly he describes it as "containing the form".

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Postby Steeliebob » Thu Apr 21, 2016 1:22 pm

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I like your gestures. Very swift, flowy and kept to the essence. Can't wait to see a bit more. :)

 

Postby NesoKaiyoH » Sat Apr 23, 2016 4:26 pm

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Nice gestures keep it up owo
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