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Postby PuRin0 » Fri Jan 22, 2016 5:07 pm

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hello everyone after spending a lot of time just lurking in here and learning from all of you amazing artists,i finally built the courage to start a sketchbook thread
so here is some drawings :)

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recently i have been doing lots of fanart of the fate/ franchise
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she looks like she's pinching her self >.< i need to practice more hands
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anatomy is hard
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someone requested that i do his OC
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i have no idea how to finish images how to color,blend,paint...and the awesome stuff
so i tried watching other artists streams (artgerm) and try to copy their process
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still have no idea what or how to finish stuff T-T maybe i need to fail more and more !
critiques and constructive feedback and any help is the most appreciated so if you see any mistakes or things that need to improvement please let me know.thanks for dropping by :).
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Postby Valkhira » Sat Jan 23, 2016 1:55 am

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Hey there! I like what you're starting your sketchbook with, I see very interesting and weird concepts with a very anime style. Really cool stuff!

Now, I'm not a pro, so take this just as an idea, but have you done lineart for any of those sketches? I believe they would benefit a lot from having cleaner, stronger lines. Especially because sometimes it gets difficult (for me, so maybe it's just my screen ^^) to see the details in some drawings. And I think they would just look awesome with bold dark lines, so give it a try if you like the sound of it!
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Postby Hybridcity » Sat Jan 23, 2016 2:43 am

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Yeah, I agree with Valk! If you're not already doing so, you should try doing some lineart for your pieces.

Ahh, but I do like this sketchbook. Its very interesting to say the least. Keep up the good work.
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Postby PuRin0 » Sat Jan 23, 2016 12:14 pm

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Valkhira wrote:Hey there! I like what you're starting your sketchbook with, I see very interesting and weird concepts with a very anime style. Really cool stuff!

Now, I'm not a pro, so take this just as an idea, but have you done lineart for any of those sketches? I believe they would benefit a lot from having cleaner, stronger lines. Especially because sometimes it gets difficult (for me, so maybe it's just my screen ^^) to see the details in some drawings. And I think they would just look awesome with bold dark lines, so give it a try if you like the sound of it!

yeah, i kinda set my screen in an angle to see the lines maybe it's the whit background or just my lines are weak ^_^' i will start trying thicker brushes next time :) thanks for the feedback tho Really appreciate it :)

Hybridcity wrote:Yeah, I agree with Valk! If you're not already doing so, you should try doing some lineart for your pieces.

Ahh, but I do like this sketchbook. Its very interesting to say the least. Keep up the good work.

Thank you ! :) i will definitely try doing more line art in the future.

 

Postby PuRin0 » Sat Jan 23, 2016 12:50 pm

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ok here i tried to redraw on top of the lines witch seemed a little scratchy
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here i tried to just change the background color to gray
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and here i tried a bigger brush i don't know if i should make it even bigger
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hope it's easier to see my drawing now, and sorry for the inconvenience ^_^'

 

Postby PuRin0 » Mon Jan 25, 2016 5:09 pm

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Postby PuRin0 » Tue Jan 26, 2016 5:13 pm

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Postby PuRin0 » Tue Jan 26, 2016 6:43 pm

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Postby PuRin0 » Tue Jan 26, 2016 9:24 pm

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Postby PuRin0 » Wed Jan 27, 2016 8:57 pm

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Postby PuRin0 » Thu Jan 28, 2016 6:47 pm

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Postby Zeroatz » Thu Jan 28, 2016 7:14 pm

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Oh wow... looks pretty good man, the only thing I felt you could improve more is your lines (Just remember that lines are not necessarily have to be in same sizes, having it thicken and thinned at certain times makes the picture pops out more). Haha honestly, I'm not much of a pro and I had this problem as well at the beginning having my lines very rough.

Also for the skeleton drawing, the ribcage seems abit too small :) but loooveee the pelvis drawing thou~!

Keep it up buddy :)
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Postby PuRin0 » Sat Jan 30, 2016 9:33 pm

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Zeroatz wrote:Oh wow... looks pretty good man, the only thing I felt you could improve more is your lines (Just remember that lines are not necessarily have to be in same sizes, having it thicken and thinned at certain times makes the picture pops out more). Haha honestly, I'm not much of a pro and I had this problem as well at the beginning having my lines very rough.

Also for the skeleton drawing, the ribcage seems abit too small :) but loooveee the pelvis drawing thou~!

Keep it up buddy :)

i'm kinda lazy with the line thing so .... yeah about the skeleton i just saw that rib cage is really small they must really have a hard time breathing XD thank you for pointing it out :)

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Postby BulletHell » Sun Jan 31, 2016 12:05 am

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These are really awesome sketches. You are doing great! If will be planning to start coloring your drawings then I would recommend you start with greyscale first, it's a lot easier.
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Postby PuRin0 » Sun Jan 31, 2016 10:04 pm

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BulletHell wrote:These are really awesome sketches. You are doing great! If will be planning to start coloring your drawings then I would recommend you start with greyscale first, it's a lot easier.

thank you for the tip definitely gonna try it ;)

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Postby PuRin0 » Sun Jan 31, 2016 11:36 pm

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Postby melnics » Mon Feb 01, 2016 2:24 am

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I like the guy wearing the skull, is he an original design?

 

Postby PuRin0 » Mon Feb 01, 2016 3:50 pm

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melnics wrote:I like the guy wearing the skull, is he an original design?

yeah he is, i guess, those are just silly drawings i do when i'm tired.I'm happy you liked him :)

 

Postby PuRin0 » Tue Feb 02, 2016 6:20 pm

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here i tried to render a mech i did before
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i'm kinda lost here, i really don't know what to do with it, it's like what's the next step? did i really finish laying down values? do i need to go more dark? or more light? what i'm i missing?
any help with the matter is really appreciated.

 

Postby L3V » Tue Feb 02, 2016 6:53 pm

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A really good sketchbook!, really love this piece.

As for the mecha rendering. You need to consider what kind of material the mecha is made of, determine where the lightsource is because right now it feels all over the place.

 

Postby PuRin0 » Tue Feb 02, 2016 7:25 pm

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Thank you for the tip, i will keep it in mind :) (this is gonna be hard. but it's something i need to do)
about the piece, it's just fanart of Gawain from Fate/Extra.Happy you liked it :)

 

Postby PuRin0 » Tue Feb 02, 2016 11:10 pm

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Postby NesoKaiyoH » Tue Feb 02, 2016 11:47 pm

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Oh wow you have some really amazing sketches here, and lots of variety. Have you tried painting any of these?
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Postby PuRin0 » Wed Feb 03, 2016 12:06 am

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NesoKaiyoH wrote:Oh wow you have some really amazing sketches here, and lots of variety. Have you tried painting any of these?

Thank you a lot for the compliment Really appreciate it :)
also i will definitely paint them when i get the hang of values and color,i have no idea how to do it right now >.< so i still need a lot of practice.

 

Postby NesoKaiyoH » Wed Feb 03, 2016 12:09 am

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PuRin0 wrote:
NesoKaiyoH wrote:Oh wow you have some really amazing sketches here, and lots of variety. Have you tried painting any of these?

Thank you a lot for the compliment Really appreciate it :)
also i will definitely paint them when i get the hang of values and color,i have no idea how to do it right now >.< so i still need a lot of practice.


You won't learn if you don't start! Might as well use these to experiment on owo
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